Rate our preview text please?

Our illustrious webmaster, has the task of writing the preview text each week. This text is fairly important as it's what search engines and other people pick up on, to promote the website and bring us extra customers.

Now the problem is, he's Norwegian and although he speaks better English than I, he'd like to see if there could be any improvements or words that he is missing which are appropriate not only to hit the worldwide fans of Black Tgirls but Americans and Black Americans?

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I think he's doing a pretty good job, aside from some small misspellings here and there which is nothing really. I find it terribly boring to constantly write about porn on my blogs, probably why my post have dwindled. So I think what is being written for the preview text is pretty good. I usually find myself watching each clip I will talk about on my blog just so I'm not sounding too generic and saying the same things over and over again.